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Easy Reading and Writing · Standard English Conventions · None · MCQ

A group of students was asked to write a short story about a time they had to overcome a challenge. One student wrote the following: "I was nervous as I waited for my turn, but I knew I could do it. I took a deep breath and went into the audition room. When I finished, the judges told me I did great! And I was proud of myself." Which choice most effectively combines the sentences in this excerpt to produce a more sophisticated and mature writing style?

Which choice most effectively combines the sentences in this excerpt to produce a more sophisticated and mature writing style?

  1. A

    I was nervous as I waited for my turn, but I knew I could do it. Taking a deep breath, I went into the audition room. When I finished, the judges told me I did great, and I was proud of myself.

  2. B

    I was nervous as I waited for my turn, but I knew I could do it. Taking a deep breath, I went into the audition room and finished, and the judges told me I did great. I was proud of myself.

  3. C

    I was nervous as I waited for my turn, but I knew I could do it. When I finished the audition, the judges told me I did great, and I was proud of myself.

  4. D

    I was nervous as I waited for my turn, but I knew I could do it. I took a deep breath, went into the audition room and finished, and the judges told me I did great! I was proud of myself.

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