The new CEO announced that she would be implementing a new policy to encourage employees to use their vacation time, a change that was designed to boost morale and productivity. She also explained that the policy would be phased in over the next quarter, giving employees time to adjust to the new guidelines. She believes that the policy will have a positive impact on employee well-being, and improve the company’s overall performance.
Which of the following revisions to the underlined portion of the passage is most accurate and grammatically correct?
Correct answer: C
Explanation
The most accurate and grammatically correct revision is to remove the unnecessary word “that” and the comma that follows it. The phrase “a change designed to boost morale and productivity” is a nonessential modifying phrase that is correctly set off from the rest of the sentence by a comma. The phrase “and she also explained” is redundant because the second clause in the sentence already implies that the CEO explained the policy. The phrase “giving employees time to adjust to the new guidelines” is a nonessential modifying phrase that is correctly set off from the rest of the sentence by a comma.
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