A researcher is writing a paper for a scientific journal. The researcher wants to ensure that the paper is clear and concise. The researcher has written the following sentence: “Although the study’s results are very important, they are only one piece of the puzzle.” Which of the following is the best way to revise the sentence to make it more concise?
Which of the following is the best way to revise the sentence to make it more concise?
Correct answer: C
Explanation
Choice C is the best answer. The word "very" can be eliminated without changing the meaning of the sentence. The word "but" is also a more concise way to express the idea of contrast than "although." Choices A and B are incorrect because they do not eliminate unnecessary words or phrases. Choice D is incorrect because it is wordy and does not maintain the sentence’s focus on the key idea.
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