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The sentence contains two independent clauses, which can be joined by a comma and a coordinating conjunction. The original sentence is incorrect because it is a comma splice, which is an error that occurs when two independent clauses are joined only by a comma. The correct punctuation to join the two clauses is a comma followed by a conjunction like "and" or "but." The choice "I have the right to tell my story, to tell it as I see fit" is the only choice that correctly punctuates the two clauses.