{"id":"opensat:ec88a640973256b15289a1e777743a27","source_id":"opensat","source_item_id":"ec88a640973256b15289a1e777743a27","external_id":"1f2f37a9","ibn":null,"question_id":"1f2f37a9","program":"SAT","module":"english","domain_code":"SEC","domain":"Standard English Conventions","skill_code":null,"skill":null,"difficulty":"M","score_band":null,"answer_type":"mcq","answer_source":"key","layout_warning":null,"form_id":null,"module_number":null,"position":null,"stem":"Which choice best revises the sentence to correct the error in the underlined portion?","stimulus":"The best way to ensure that a piece of writing is clear is to carefully consider its structure. For example, it is important to use transitions to connect ideas and to use parallel structure to create a sense of balance. Additionally, it is important to avoid using unnecessary words and phrases. The following sentence demonstrates one way to make a piece of writing more concise, and it also demonstrates one way to ensure that the sentence has a clear and logical structure. The author, which is a well-known writer, is currently working on a new novel.","stimulus_html":"<p>The best way to ensure that a piece of writing is clear is to carefully consider its structure. For example, it is important to use transitions to connect ideas and to use parallel structure to create a sense of balance. Additionally, it is important to avoid using unnecessary words and phrases. The following sentence demonstrates one way to make a piece of writing more concise, and it also demonstrates one way to ensure that the sentence has a clear and logical structure. The author, which is a well-known writer, is currently working on a new novel.</p>","stem_html":"<p>Which choice best revises the sentence to correct the error in the underlined portion?</p>","rationale_html":"<p>The underlined portion of the sentence is a misplaced modifier because the phrase &quot;which is a well-known writer&quot; doesn&#x27;t clearly modify the noun &quot;author.&quot; The phrase should be placed immediately after the noun &quot;author.&quot; Choice C is the only choice that places the phrase in the correct position. Choice A is incorrect because the pronoun &quot;who&quot; should be used to refer to a person, not a thing. Choice B is incorrect because the participial phrase &quot;being a well-known writer&quot; is not grammatically correct in this context. Choice D is incorrect because the pronoun &quot;whom&quot; should be used to refer to the object of a verb or preposition, not the subject of a clause.</p>","correct_answer":["C"],"has_media":false,"has_mathml":false,"has_table":false,"source_created_at":null,"source_updated_at":null,"options":[{"label":"A","content_html":"<p>The author, who is a well-known writer, is currently working on a new novel.</p>","ord":0},{"label":"B","content_html":"<p>The author, being a well-known writer, is currently working on a new novel.</p>","ord":1},{"label":"C","content_html":"<p>The author, a well-known writer, is currently working on a new novel.</p>","ord":2},{"label":"D","content_html":"<p>The author, whom is a well-known writer, is currently working on a new novel.</p>","ord":3}],"attribution":{"source_id":"opensat","source_name":"OpenSAT community question bank","rights_holder":"OpenSAT contributors","canonical_url":"https://github.com/Anas099X/OpenSAT","retrieved_from":"https://pinesat.duckdns.org/api/questions","attribution":"Reading and Writing practice questions from the OpenSAT community question bank, whose licence permits free use of the database.","disclaimer":"OpenSAT items are community-written or AI-generated practice material, not official College Board questions; quality varies.","license":"OpenSAT LICENSE.md: the database may be used freely, including commercially, without restriction. Code is separately restricted.","redistributable":true,"item_count":1406}}